هاذي اول مره اكتب خاطره وكتبتها بالانجليزي
بحكم تخصصي بس على فكره انا مبتدئه
لسى مستوى ثاني بالجامعه:shy:
المهم تمهني ارائكم وانتقاداتكم خصوصا اصحاب الخبره…(f)
I see you in every place,
I imagine your smile in every face
where are you?
I don’t find any trace
how can you let me lone
while the only thing I can do is remember your voice tone,and start wailing as a little girl
don’t you remember our deal?
when my eyes whisper to your eyes
"let’s be lovers for ever for ever"
"for ever is too short"
your eyes answered my eyes with warm hug
in that moment I realized how much you love me
belong to your love
I can’t take any more
you know where you can find me
just ask your heart and you will find the answer there
يالله انتظر ردودكم
(f) (f) (f) (f) (f)
AWESOME WORDS ND MEANINGFULL TOO
UR TALENT SISTER KEEP IT UP
AND ENSHALLA ONE DAY U’LL B KNOWN WELL SOMEWHERE
GOOD LUCK
:shy:
thankyou my dear
I can’t express my delight
when I saw your comment
thanks a lot for your encouragement :salam:
I promise you to keep up
thanks again
(f) (f) (f) (f) (f)
and keeo it up
really its perfect
and thankx dear
and keeo it up
really its perfect
and thankx
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thanks dalo3ah
for passing in my topic
thankyou for your nice words
thankyou my dear
(f) (f) (f) (f) (f)
thankyou so much my dear
هلا و غلا اختي جنا
gooood start.. i like your ideas and line of thoughts..
they say when you love someone let them go.. if they come back they belong to you, if they don’t come back they were never yours to begin with..
keeep on writing dear.. and with time you will go from good to the best (y)
and dont forget to post for us .. whatever you write
:flower: :flower: :flower:
thankyou so much
I’m afraid if I let them go they won’t belong:dd: …
but I agree with you if they don’t belong,they won’t be mine:no: .
thanks again for your advice:salam: .
I promise you if I write anything, I won’t hesitate to tel you about it ,and I’ll request your criticism too.