Correct my compasation 2024.

Here is( the verb is missing) my compasation composition

to achieve is a transitive verb so we need a noun not an adjective and the noun here is success we don’t need any articles because it’s a common noun which means everybody knows what is success) )How to achive achieve)the successful sucess
If you do have (we do not do keys we either have them or not) the seven keys the succeful (we need to precise which type of keys so we will say the seven keys of success) you will achive achieve what you want. All person seek to successful and to be succed in their life.(the whole structure is wrong: every person who seeks success can achieve it. You must belive blieve for( we say we blieve in somthing) your successful we need the noun not the adjective your success l and you will be it and successful you will be. For the successful without debet (what do you mean by debet .
The duty to your work. It do you very great Doing all duties at work will help you a lot to become successful . Do not leave your work until one day because if you leave it you will lose every rhing you do before it.( the structuer of the sentence is wrong we would rather say don’t postpone your work assignements because you will lose a lot. The duty
dedication towards your work will make it part of your life
make your work like its part from your life .
Practise your work everyday and do not leave it.
Surrounding (the imperative is more suitable here than the gerend we would say: surround yourself) your self with optmists because they will support help you to complete your stree path. Do not talk with pessimistics because if you talk with them you will be like them. Warining, warning from theives the successful Beware of those who want to steel your success,Care your sekf and be careful( PS we don’t need to repeat be careful because we already said beware I just wanted to correct the spelling).. Read books, talk discuss information from about every things( every+ singular), learn many languages, listen to programmes, share with people to support you, improve your self, learn from your mistakes. Do not sleap sleep if you valuate value yourself.

The life has many people, some persone optmists and some person pessimistics. In this world there pepole who are optimistics and others whor pessimitics. The people decide their life what what kind of life they want. You must decide choose your steet way to
achive yoursuccessful
achieve success

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